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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
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0 posted 2000-07-22 05:07 AM


Cannot passions bleed
For true souls begin with love
amongst these troubles

© Copyright 2000 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-22 02:49 PM


Michael~
Indeed, indeed ...
I think this one qualifies as Senyru ..
Lovely thoughts.
Indeed, indeed.
~*Marge*~


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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-07-22 03:06 PM


Ok you...
werent you paying attention in Nans
class ... daydreaming again... LOL

now lets see if we can define this

Haikus are about Nature
Senyrus are about emotions
(which you write so well about)
now next time do your homework or we will
have to keep you after school  
(just kidding)
later 5-7-5 gator
jm

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-07-22 05:17 PM


I don't care what form it is... I like it!!
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