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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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If words could make wishes come true This would be the wish I wish for you That you would know joy and happiness every day That nothing but sun would brighten your way If tears could take away the pain Mine would fill you rivers again and again So that your heart would never feel the sting That comes with the problems life can bring If arms could hold life and love Mine would give you the sun and stars above That you would know you are never really alone To give you the greatest love ever known ------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Ah...It's coming back Sven...you must have had a good talk with yourself. This is almost there,and its very good!  Gossamerwings ;) |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
You should be able to delete your name when you make a big goof and post twice. ROTF!!! [This message has been edited by Gossamerwings (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
this is wonderful and very tender. appause!!!!!!!  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ you are just the sweetest, this was so devine what a lovely poem...well done my friend.See Ya Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~This was a lovely piece Sven...Honest and truthfull, just the way i like it~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Gossamer, you must have really liked this one!! You responded twice!! LOL And let's just say that I put myself in a corner until I came up with this one!! Thank you my friend. . .Mark, thank you!! Thank you!! *bows* LOL tracie, thank you my friend. . . you're pretty sweet yourself!  Beth, thank you. . . it's all I know how to write. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Your heart always is an open book my friend. I never read any ones poetry, that so easily allows the flow of emotion from pen to paper. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Such a sweet and tender piece Sven. Shows a very gentle heart. Just beautiful. Bonnie [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very tender heart moving piece Sven. It read so casual yet so intense at the same time......take care...ethome |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Beautiful as always Sven |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
My God, now this is simply beautiful and moving. As always you touch my heart. "IF" only all men were like you. You should move down here and hold a seminar and teach them a thing or two...and I could be your manager and of course, we could make millions, but remember I get 70% (that's what I MADE you agree on last time) LOL Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, an open book indeed. . . thank you my friend. . . Bonnie, thank you. . . ethome, thank you, glad that you liked it. . . kitkat, thank you my friend. . . Melissa, as always, you give me far too much credit my friend. . . and I'm sure that most men are like me. . . they just have trouble saying it. . . and a seminar?? I'm kinda shy you know. . . LOL  But I still think that we're going to have to work out this 70/30 thing!!---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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