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Dreamkeeper, I (Rondel) |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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 Dreamkeeper, I As sunset blends my coloured world I dream the endless of your gaze You touch my heart, my mind unfurled Dreamkeeper, I, of nighttime daze. A candle drips, the wax has curled Three roses fill a crystal vase As sunset blends my coloured world And dark ascends to midnight haze. Around my neck, your kisses, pearled Bejeweled in me, desires laze Three roses scent upon me praise They blush the dusk in prism swirled As sunset blends my coloured world. M 2k |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh my, I do believe this treasure was a wee bit overlooked, so if I may {bump} it back where it rightly belongs... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sunshine...that's me ..often overlooked..but thank you for the read..sometimes when I tell what type of poem it is or the form..it does tend to turn people off..but I feel it never hurts for new poets to learn there is also form to poetry if they want to learn it.. ~~soft thanks again Maureen |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Maureen, I'm with Sunny. . . this one should not have been overlooked. . . it's wonderful. . . It's nice to see people writing in forms. . . gives us a chance to stretch the poetic imagination. . . Excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ And lovely it is ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful Maureen! I agree with the others a work of poetic art like this should never be overlooked. "As sunset blends my colored world," I know I'm right about this. Take care..........ethome |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sven..thank you, yes I often do challenges on other sites that ask to do a certain form and in a year I have learned so much from it... Marge..happy you liked it... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
ethome...E. thank you for stopping by each time to read and comment ...it's a wonderful feeling to know someone reads you ~~softly hugging you Maureen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Overlooked....no way. I am just slow sometimes to getting there. This is EXCELLENT and the imagery once again is so stunning. I like the stretch and the freshness of your style.  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
So I "got style" huh? I have been told more often that I "got rhythm"... just joshing you...thank you, Mark, you are very sweet ~~softly Maureen * and I know, I have read how greatly your postership(coining a new word) has increased...making it hard to respond to all..*w |
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