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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Starry eyed Passion carried breeze stirs amid the poets fair Stars shine in their eyes Dark Angel |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Perfect! I am sure to get better at these with yourself and Kaile around to inspire me. You are becoming multi-dimensional Maree...lol Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Absolutely beautiful Maree! You're fast becoming a Haiku God, I swear it!  Keep them up so I can learn and enjoy them!*Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey!! it is from you both, Jamie and Krista, that I am inspired and learning from LOL Thank you for your most lovely replies Maree |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I have never tried to say so much in so few words but I want to try...I am just not sure if i understand the "rules"? 5-7-5 syllables right? never say never |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Maree, you truly are an Angel of Light in this one hey?? Beautiful hon... SB |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
So pretty such a sweet little haiku..well doneTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
teach me teach me O mistress of haiku  MP |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely images! Great Haiku...  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Such a light you shine On others within your sphere Poetic brilliance ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all so very much for your sweet replies I enjoy the Haiku's so I there will be more Thanks again |
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