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Loves Promise To You
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Loves Promise To You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“LOVES PROMISE TO YOU” As long as I live, And with each day we share. I'll do anything for you, I will follow you anywhere. Many years ago our love was new, And together we grew to know each day's pleasures. We also knew that our love and memories, Would always be our greatest treasures. So my promise to you is from the heart, And my prayer is that we will never be apart. For as long as there is forever, my love will be true, And as long as I live, I will always love you. Bill Charles |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill... I want this one!!! I do believe that this is the most tender, sincere poetry I have ever heard. It's a loving vow, and so beautiful...... This is definitely one for the book, my friend! Well Done......< !signature--> ~~~Never say Never!~~~ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny, You have a most gracious and tender heart to reply to this poem with the words that you said. I must say, "Thank you again so very much my friend, may every poem that you write continue with their brillance". |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BC~ this is beautiful and so very loving.  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA, Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I am always thrilled when I see that someone has stopped by. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Bill, your devotion and adoration rings through clearly in these lovely sentiments! Very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lucky lady! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Bill- I ADORE this one. The undying love in this piece is amazing work. So touching...thanks for sharing. love & all, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Bill- I ADORE this one. The undying love in this piece is amazing work. So touching...thanks for sharing. love & all, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Such beautiful and loving sentiments Bill. Well done piece of work.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kit McCallum, Thank you Kit, your comments are appreciated. Sunshine, Thank you for a most meaningful comment. I can dream though! Holly, Thank you Holly for your most gracious words. There is a lot there waiting to get out to share. Thanks again. |
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LiLOnE Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41Sudbury, Ma |
Bill. This is absolutly beautifull and breathtaking poem!! I LOVE IT! PS: She is very lucky! This poem is the key to unlock any womens heart!!! ~*~LiLOnE~*~ |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Do you have a brother/uncle/cousin/grandpa that's available? I'd like a man like this too!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
LiLOnE What gracious comments from you about this poem. I'm very glad that you liked it and took the time to stop by. I agree that someone is very lucky, but I'm just not sure who it is at this time. Thanks again. Poet deVine, I'm sorry to say that none of the above are available at this time. But, the writer of this poem feels as if he is at times!!!! Thanks for your tender and touching comments. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Bill this is really well chosen words of Love and devotion...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ethome, I apologize, as I missed your reply and must have had my eyes closed as I went by it. Thank you once again for stopping by and commenting on this poem. JMLee12345, I appreciate that you took the time to comment on this poem. Thank you once again. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Beautiful and romantic! Do you have a brother? lol  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Kathryn Miller New Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 6 |
I hope you have shown this to the one you love. Sometimes just saying it doesn't mean much but putting it on paper means everything. Thank you for showing me that love is always here. Genuine feeelings shared. Kathryn Miller |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Bill, what a touching testimonial to your devotion. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Melissa Honeybee, Thank you for your most gracious comments. I do have a brother, but married, I might say. Thanks again. Kathryn Miller, Yes, it has been shown to that special someone. I believe too, that love is always there, no matter what happens, if one would only follow their heart. Thank you for sharing your feelings, and thanks for stopping by. Hi Meadowmuse, Thank you so much for the touching words about this poem that I have written. |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
BC Very loving and tender words coming from deep within the heart. Very touching and nicely done. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Bill its so wonderful to see a man who can share his innermost thoughts and hopes. She is one lucky lady. never say never |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Was going to say a very touching poem but, ...hmmm??? Oh heck...Very touching poem,Bill! Gossamerwings ;) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ddgoose, Thanks once again for stopping by. And thank you for the kind comments that you have made. And yes, deep from the heart I know that it comes. Paula Finn Thanks Paula once again for your gracious comments. It is very inspiring when comments such as yours are shared. Gossamerwings, Appreciate that you have stopped by once again. And thank you for your comments. |
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