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Let's Try It Again..
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Let's Try It Again.. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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I think that we should try it again, Haven't felt like this since I don't when, I like to take it slowly at first, Sorry if I didn't quench your thirst, I think that we should try it again, I'll take you places you have never been, Come on baby let's try it again, I'll give you now what I couldn't give you then, So won't you please try it again? Just meet me at quarter past ten. I'll be watching you all night, Thinking of you holding me tight, Giving me shivers up and down my spine, If only I could make you mine, You're my desire, could set my soul on fire, Baby you could take me higher then I've ever been, Now come on baby let's try it again, Haven't felt like this since I don't when, What you did to me, won't you do it again..... Julie :) |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Hahahah....JulieAnn, I like this! To hear a woman tell her lover exactly what she wants! Fantastic! [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you so much.....I wrote this for someone I haven't known long but after one fantastic night I was melting!!!  Julie :) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This sounds like it would make great lyrics for a song!  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ooohh yeah Julie...makes me think of a song...baby if you wanna be my lover you better take me home.... never say never |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you both for your replys....it took me about five minutes to write.....it just sort of came out of a lot of feelings.......I am glad you all liked it!!!  Julie :) |
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