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ma miller
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0 posted 2000-07-21 01:35 PM


to quest's bend ...

the questing worries my soul
run as i may, run to dismay
away from whats and wheres
running down the whens and hows
words of quest to burn my best
those odd shaped marks we use
telling answers to pay their dues
its circle not complete to show
for it knows not where to go
until it hears retort's treat
the mark's bidding serves us all
to voices raised at quest's end
a glass to heave to quest's bend
for without, words seem so blah
how dare we -- language with a flaw


M.A. Miller
07.21.00
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My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.



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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 2000-07-21 01:45 PM


Writing is indeed a quest, such as life itself. Thoughtful commentary, MA.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau



brian madden
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2 posted 2000-07-21 01:50 PM


wonderful musings on writing.

why must we pray
screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith

ma miller
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3 posted 2000-07-21 08:31 PM


thank you both ... (brian) you can call it musing, but quite frankly, the thought of a question mark troubled me for a long time ... if you're interested in etymology in the least, research the roots of the question mark ... i'm sure you'll be as intrigued as i was ... thanks again for reading ...

m.a.

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4 posted 2000-07-22 07:16 AM


MAMiller~
What intrigue that drew you to these lines -

'those odd shaped marks we use
telling answers to pay their dues
its circle not complete to show
for it knows not where to go'

'how dare we -- language with a flaw'

Wonderful depth.
~*Marge*~




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ethome
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5 posted 2000-07-22 07:34 AM


Well done MA.
I read your reply to Brian and I am going to do just so. I think it is going to add to the meaning of your poem. Good work all the same!

ma miller
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6 posted 2000-07-22 12:24 PM


hi Marge and ethome ... this is one of those oddball things i dwell on ... ethome, let us know what you find out about our friend, the "questing" mark ... thanks again for reading ...
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