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The Artist |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Dressed in black lace, she walks to the window Darkened the night, as it shadows her past Each curve of body, as seen in the moonlight Wrestles his mind, as he molds her in cast. Gently he forms her, oval, head tilted Producing a smile on her satin sweet lips Swan like her neck as he molds, presses softly Touching and wetting, with bold fingertips. Soft rounded shoulders, that bend slightly forward Weighted a bit from the breasts, full in sphere Gingerly cupping, caressing and fondling Mindwarped, as he, continues from there. Stops for a moment to look through that window Eying her body, silhouette in the night Thumping, his heart,as it rises, desires Knowing the next forming, sparks of delight. On to the curvings of hips, down from waistline Pinching and pressing, 'til heart like, complete Nestled in front, fingers flow to the inside And next shaped her thighs, as his eye skin-clay meet. Once again stopping, he rises from bended To look one more time, at his model in black Measures remainder, then shapes legs, to suit him Then stands and admires, her front to her back. Sighing, he gazes from model to window, Formation life-like, his silhouette in lace Dresses her, copies her likeness, he wrestled Lovingly placing a kiss upon face. ©Maureen/Moonchild |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is gorgeous writing and as an artist I have to tell you that you have captured the passion quite well.  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Shhhhhh...Don't tell anyone Mark... but I have this oversized footed bathtub that I fill with vanilla bubbles and take my thoughts with me and write them down each day while relaxing. I have these fantasies and my 47 windows...sometimes my dark stranger/shadow climbs a tree onto the porch roof of my 100 year old home and appears quietly joining me...and sometimes I just imagine what if someone were looking in on me...this night...I had an artist peering through my window, looking in...creating a model of something he can't ever have ...forming it to my likeness...now remember..this was our little secret shhhhhhh ~~soft smiles *wink M [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
MMoonchild...I enjoyed the reply as much as I did reading the poem!!! I'm very glad to see that the art of fantasizing is alive and well!!! This was perfection, and I think I'll go back for another peek!! Hee-Hee!!! (at the poem!!)< !signature--> ~~~Never say Never!~~~ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Oh darn...that reply above was supposed to be a secret message to Mark...you mean everyone can read it now? Have I no shame.... shhhhhhhhh ...well now just keep it between us three. *wink thanks Sunny1...I am having fun on here..I just wish I could read and respond to every poem, but there are soooooo many ~~softsmiles Maureen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ Enjoyed the sensual feel of the artist's hands ... as they worked your imagination. Nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Maureen, you "cast" the image quite well! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful Maureen! Great images of the artist at work with his model. Great lines of pasion and sensuality..... |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
My imagination surprises me of late..thank you Marge ~~softly smiling MM |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sunshine..thank you for casting yourlight upon my days.. ~~softly Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
ethome...thank you E. too nice your words...but I eat them up ~~soft smile M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A sensual delight...James |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
James...such a nice response thank you ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Came back to take another peek. (at the poem....REALLY!!!!!! I mean can I help it if the drapes were left wide open. It was only a peek, so what's the harm???? You should see the canvas!!!!!  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Now Mark I forgot to tell you...I have only sheer curtains and on the third floor none..here is a cute one ok...just for you ..don't let anyone else read it please....I will turn all shades of "blush" couldn't post here as I wasn't sure if it's too sensual for this forum... Taste For Love http://www.geocities.com/mmoonchild1/TasteView.html Oh and would I love to see that canvas!!! ~~smiling Maureen |
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