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Why don't you understand me?
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Why don't you understand me? |
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Fairy Princess Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 64Fitchburg Ma, USA |
You never understood me nor will you ever, I wish you'd understand me that hurts me, Remember I don't feel pity or sorrow for myself. Don't think for me don't say anything, If you have something to say say it to me, I have feelings too you may not understand that. Let's try to be kind you say I'm kind, You can drive me crazy, Just for today lets try getting along. If that's not going to happen lets not talk then, First when moms in the house your nice, Whn she leaves you start acting mean why? I should tape record and let mom hear you, Since you'll lie to her like always, Oh well so I hope you change your attudtude. Please that's all I'm asking you I don't know what I did to you I try my best to be nice to you. If you have something to say and it's something mean don't say it all, Your 27 and your still acting like a 6 or 10 year old, You may think your cool but your not. You'll never grow up, I know you won't, So give me time to be nice and I'll be nice to you too. **************************************************** This is for my older sister, she doesn't know how to act like a 27 year old only a 6 or 10 year old. ((Peace out)) ~*~Fairy Princess~*~ |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
This poem shows strong emotions of hurtness. Find some relief through your peers and others. Good luck. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
jealousies come in all shapes and form...Princess, sometimes you have to accept that others are never going to change..I have an older sister who is like that..I now don't cry or get upset over her lack of sensitivity..I accept that as a weakness on her part.. ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Princess, I read your poem and can understand what feelings you have written in it. Smile Princess, I know that sometimes it is difficult, but most times it helps. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FairyPrincess~ Well, got that out, did ya' ? Good for you !  Isn't it amazing to realize that you have the power to control how someone else makes you feel ? No buttons visible ... no buttons to be pushed ! Keep writing, dear ! I'm enjoying you. Visited your web page too ! COOL !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
we shouldn't take anothers' feelings for granted ... quality time with others will be remembered and cherished above all else ... some people defy the growth charts ... have patience well captured thoughts here nicely written |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Well...it sure seems like you're dealing with a lot! Intense feelings in there. Time just may make all things better for you both...time has a way of doing that. Nice writing though! Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Fairy princess~ Hi and welcome to passions Great to vent our emotions through poetry isn't it...which you have done well here. I think sweetie that maybe you need to show big sis this poem and just explain to her that this is how she makes you feel (thats just my thoughts though and you don't have to follow through with that) well good job I will keep an eye out for more from you Bye Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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