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ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
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0 posted 2000-07-21 10:33 AM


Love's Pill ...

Maybe this is hell(?)
All we guess is that it's not heaven
Yet we search on for the key of life
Blinded by our own intelligence
Ever missing the clues of beauty
The secrets nature holds in store
Hidden away from sleuths of science
Isolation in space jades our perception
Stealing our sight from seeing real truth
Is this our ultimate end?
Space holds promise, but infinity's curse
Hovering above us forever and a day
Ending never to find 'til death
Line up and take your medicine
Love's pill is the easiest to swallow
(?)

M.A. Miller
07.21.00
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My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.





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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2000-07-21 11:06 AM


Loved the Acrostic!  Well done, mark!
ma miller
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2 posted 2000-07-21 12:55 PM


thanks for reading serenity ... it's been done many times before, but i never tried ...
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