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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-07-21 01:05 AM


Driving around in the car getting fat,
Running around is not for this cat,
Stretching my arm to reach for a beer,
But not stretching for my health even if death is near,
Choking down on chips and other such snack,
High fat is not what my body seems to lack,
What once was a six-pack,
Now curved into a fat pack,
Power of spinach for Popeye,
But I do not jump in saying aye aye,
Why care for a body, which will wither anyway?
I am only nineteen by the way.



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Jaysun C
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1 posted 2000-07-21 02:57 AM


you type some ill sh** dog
i hear that six pack thing


Saunni
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2 posted 2000-07-21 04:18 AM


That was too cool!!!!

Sauni

Sauni :)

Xeonox
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3 posted 2000-07-24 02:09 AM


Why not something out of the blue right Jaysun? I am glad you had a good laugh.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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4 posted 2000-07-24 02:19 AM


19 HUH? I wouldnt have guessed...but enjoyed the read...

never say never

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