BDC A HUGE HUG. I wish their words I could say, to express how I feel about this poem but when reading something so raw I am left lost for words. All I want to do is rush to your side and ask "are you ok?" then give you a give hug. I only wish my arms could reach that far. anyway take care my friend, I hope the rays of light shine down soon until then love and concern, brian.
why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith
TEXAS (it's all big)
Tears of ice fall like rain Remove the power to cause me pain
Iíll live here in the dark Remembrance my eternal spark Cold, Alone....void of life From your hands I take the knife
Trust and love did once exist A second look I will resist ======================== No more tears will spill today Closing eyes....you walk away Taken, Used....the knife was turned Heart to Stone....lesson learned ==========================
we learn the lessons of the heart the hard way...sometimes we learn them more than once...but in time we do learn from our- OR-their mistakes and we grow stronger and wiser with each tear... your poetry of late makes my point for me... written from that place deep with-in my SS and by writing it out... we let it out..let it go... You know....I know...hearts know time to go fly in the sunshine sweet butterfly love ya JM
There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~
Butterflies_dont_cry, This is so touching and sad.. Butterflies are not suppose to be sad. All I could think of was wanting to help, but a hug is all I can send. A tear came down, even to my eyes. Very nice Butterflies_dont_cry, but a smile on your face, not a tear.
My dear friend! This is awesome writing, powerful, painful, emotive, and straight from the heart as always. By hanging onto the memories you have learned the lessons and become stronger and wiser. You know my shoulder is always available, take care!
God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
Looks like some lingering pain has stopped by for a little visit...I believe that we do learn lessons from our mistakes or our pain...in my case I realize that I need to be more dedicated and devoted when I am actively in a relationship...embrace it and value it...when its gone its too late..James
You've written with a dreary pen m'friend. Inky dark and full of the poignant emotions that we've all known even if we weren't able to express them! You've done it magnificently here... and I really liked your usage of ellipsis' to segregate in the lines!