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Melody of my heart(Sven's old challenge)
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Melody of my heart(Sven's old challenge) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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It has been ages since we parted Now, frosty buds bloom It has been ages since we parted Now, hiberated squirrels scramble for food It has been ages since we parted Now, vacationing birds fly their way home On the hallway, The air waves are filled with the chatter of chirpy voices, The noise level is soared to greater heights with juicy gossip and good-natured banter Taking in a deep breath Enjoying the marvelicious vibes Melody of my heart, Song of my life It's a wonderful world [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 07-20-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Dont know the challenge but love the poem never say never |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Loved this poem also, I am sure that you have more than fulfilled the challenge. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
I thought everyone would meet this challenge with a nice romantic poem, but you surprised me with this theme. The challenge was taken, and you succeeded, even if the last line was supposed to be the first. Great poem........ great! Linda M  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wow kaile, you really went back to the archives for this challenge. . . And did very well. . . a wonderful poem. . . loved the theme that you developed. . . a song of loss. . . the melody still played. . . even now. . . Excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanx Paula,linda and Sven for replying No, brian, moi havent fulfilled the challenge at all for the challenge was to begin a poem with the line "melody of my heart, song of my life"...(something which i didnt realise until i finished this poem) Sven, moi looking forward to read YOUR poems for your challenge  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
kaile, in this case. . . I'll let that part about it being the first line go. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Kaile, the song you are singing, the melody that we heard. I think it's the song of spring. Wonderful... It's just wonderful! I like the way you started your poem!~~~~~ It has been ages since we parted Now, frosty buds bloom It has been ages since we parted Now, hiberated squirrels scramble for food It has been ages since we parted Now, vacationing birds fly their way home _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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