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Jaysun C
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since 2000-07-20
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0 posted 2000-07-20 09:24 AM





Too deep to sleep
caught in thought between my sheets
past prose moonlight shows
lessons behind tired eyes close

into the conscious
sub not stitute for my reality


p.s. Thank you for all of your poetry last nite, it helped me through a long nite. -live and love-  

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HerMelness
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1 posted 2000-07-20 10:26 AM


Short.. but sweet.. you have a different use of words.. i like it! I look forward to seeing more of your work! =)

-Mel-


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Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-07-20 07:49 PM


This is good...insomnia is horrible..I've been there...
ethome
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3 posted 2000-07-20 07:56 PM


If reading the poetry here helped, I can say for one, I am glad. Hope you enjoy your time reading and writing here.......take care...ethome.....
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4 posted 2000-07-20 08:04 PM


JaysunC~
Welcome to Passion's.
Please join us anytime ...
Glad to see your thoughts here.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jaysun C
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5 posted 2000-07-20 11:30 PM


thank you every one

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