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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2000-07-20 08:45 AM



You are my music......
I let my fingers run over the sleek, hard
     curves of your body..
and you respond to my every touch....
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I touch you, and our song becomes a reality..
Together we reach a measure of ecstacy
     only colored by mood and power!
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You never let me down..
and you're always ready for me..
Wherever, whenever, and however I want you!
I look at you, and your body seems to beg
     me to turn you on....
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We have so much in common, You and I..
We compliment each others capabilities,
     teaching while learning..
You teach me order, while I teach you
             feeling....
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You're my favorite dancing partner..
We dance together for hours,
     sometimes every night!
If I stumble, I know that you are
     right there in front of me..
ready to break my fall.....
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Yes, I play you for music..........

      You're the best synthesizer this
           keyboardist has ever
                   had!!        

© Copyright 2000 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-07-20 09:48 AM


I love a good song especially when the words and the music just seem to fall together in perfect harmony.  This one hit that mark and for that you receive a standing "O".
SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
2 posted 2000-07-20 10:06 AM


Sunny1~ this is great! I wish I could play the keyboard, or any instrument for that matter, I think I'd really like the drums. -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



ma miller
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

3 posted 2000-07-20 10:19 AM


hi Sunny1 ... enjoyed reading this much ... thanks.
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
4 posted 2000-07-20 10:35 AM



Mark.....Thank you for your support, and
          I'm glad you didn't mind that it
          was a love poem to my keyboard!!

SEA......Thank you...and like Nike says:
          'Just do it!'  The world doesn't
          have enough good drummers!!!

MA.......Thank you for reading this.....
          as you know I'm a great fan of
                    yours, too!


~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment



Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2000-07-20 11:08 AM


Sunny1,
You never cease to amaze me with what you write. So sensual, so intimate, so caring. Your talent is beyond words.

"I let my fingers run over the sleek, hard
curves of your body..
and you respond to my every touch...."

My, my Sunny1, you sure know how to express yourself. This poem is so nice.
More!! More!!!!

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
6 posted 2000-07-20 12:26 PM


Bill....

     Aah...thank you for enjoying this!
     Some mornings I just wake up in an
     off-the-wall poetic haze!!!!


~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment



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