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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
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australia

0 posted 2000-07-20 02:50 AM


I look into your eyes.......
I see all the dreams dreamed
I see all the wishes wished

I look into your soul.....
I see all the moments lived
I see all the knowledge known

I look into your heart
I see....Me


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Effigy
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 486
disbelief
1 posted 2000-07-20 03:10 AM


nice. I enjoyed.
linda munday
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia
2 posted 2000-07-20 03:25 AM


I look into your heart
I see....me


Very lovely poem you have written and shared with us.
I especially liked the ending.

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