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Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia

0 posted 2000-07-20 01:51 AM


It's A Quiet Night To Cry

Little by little I've searched to find and even closer way
To see you, find you and feel you today
In me, I just didn't have this day on my side
It's been one long, lonely and confusing ride...

But, through it all I didn't completely give up
A part of me waited, stood back, stood strong and tough
I allowed for my thoughts to keep returning to you
The sun's gone down, another day, I made it through...

So, darkness has fallen but only a little light remains
It's under these stars I've noticed just how much has changed
Oh, Friend, I'm looking and can't find all the reasons why
So, I sit here, in sadness; it's a quiet night to cry...

If I had one wish that I could make come true
I'd wish for the beach, those waves, and just me and you
Oh, Friend, I can't seem to find the reasons why
So, I sit here, missing you; it's a quiet night to cry...

I've never felt lonely as I do tonight
Praying now, that from you, an even stronger light
Let me feel what it's like again to fly so high
While I sit here, reaching; it's a quiet night to cry...

It seems like forever since you've taken my hand at all
God, I was so hoping I was never again gonna fall
But, I have just a touch of a broken heart
A quiet night to cry for the miles we're apart...

I hope to never hear lonely so strongly and clearly again
I need to find the way to reach you all over, My Friend
And, though I've found a quiet night to cry all alone
I sit here, waiting, for you, to carry me home...

Saun



Sauni :)

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poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2000-07-20 04:27 AM


i could feel your words deep in my heart...this was beautiful....very much enjoyed!
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-07-20 04:33 AM


WOW...wonderful read, very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-07-20 08:09 AM



Oh, Saunni, this is as beautiful as every-thing else that you write!!!!

    'I hope to never hear lonely,
     so strongly and clearly again....'

This is so elegantly put.....
            I know this feeling.....


~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment



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