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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 07-19-2000 11:53 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

In my mind
I escape this room
Where silence is entombed

In my mind
I see the light
On this perfect night

In my mind
I close my eyes
Taking on another guise

In my mind
I dream of tomorrow
Swallowing tears of sorrow

In my mind
I feel your touch
The memory's too much

In my mind
The anger is gone
Peace awakens with the dawn




Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats
© Copyright 2000 Jennifer L. Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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1 posted 07-19-2000 11:59 PM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

Jenn...in my mind...where all good things dwell...you hold a special place...this is lovely

never say never
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2 posted 07-20-2000 12:25 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

LW~ This is really great.   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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3 posted 07-20-2000 01:07 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Jenn, Glad to see you writing of happier times to come. As you know right now I am an emotional wreck. Thanks for giving me this small glimpse of hope
Marina
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4 posted 07-20-2000 02:15 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

The mind is a very powerful thing.  After the heart has ruled for so long, sometimes it is best to let the mind take over.  Good expression of emotions here Jenn.

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Sudhir Iyer
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5 posted 07-20-2000 03:29 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

In my mind,
Words from your pen flow,
Provoking thoughts that, a path, show.


Lone Wolf....
An excellent poem here putting forth the emotions with right measure...

regards,
sudhir
linda munday
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6 posted 07-20-2000 03:35 AM       View Profile for linda munday   Email linda munday   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for linda munday

Peace awakens with the dawn....

Perfect wording but... (when?)

A great poem!!!!
I mean it  
tracie66
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7 posted 07-20-2000 04:28 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Such a beautiful piece LW
So glad the anger has eased and you are slowly finding piece.
*HUG*
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe

Kit McCallum
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8 posted 07-20-2000 05:45 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This holds such an inspirational feeling Lone Wolf ... all things heal with time, and peace will come eventually ... wonderful!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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9 posted 07-20-2000 07:21 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LoneWolf~
'In my mind' ... I go to the meadow !
Lovely, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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Butterflies_dont_cry
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10 posted 07-20-2000 07:32 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

L.W.* Stunning work my friend.....this says
so much and gives hope of a better tomorrow.
Take care  ***AW Hugs***
Trew
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11 posted 07-20-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for Trew   Email Trew   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trew

I like the style of this one!
Keep finding peace, Jenn.
And keep writing 'em, they're great!
jefsand
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12 posted 07-20-2000 07:45 PM       View Profile for jefsand   Email jefsand   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jefsand

Everyday is a new day, and a fresh start! I really liked this poem. Just when your feeling alone, you find out what a small world it really is.

jefsand
Lone Wolf
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13 posted 07-20-2000 08:00 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Paula . . . Thank you, you have a special place in mine as well.  

SEA . . . Thank you!!

Jeff . . . There are always happier times, my friend.  You will see.  I know it is a tough time for you.  Happy to give you some hope.  

Marina . . .Yes, it is very powerful.  The heart can take no more.  Thank you.  

Sudhir . . . What a lovely stanza!!  Thank you very much.  There is a path there.  I will find it.  

Linda . . . Thanks.  When?  Very soon. Happy you enjoyed it.  

Tracie . . . Yes, peace will soon be at hand.  **HUGS**  Thank you my friend!!  

Kit . . . Yes, they do and I know it will. Thanks.

Marge . . . The meadow is awesome my friend!!  hehe.  Been playing with that phrase for some time now.  Glad I finally got something to show for it.  

BDC . . . Thank you!!  It says a lot doesn't it.  WE will get there my friend.  I just know it.  

Trew . . . Thanks, I will keep writing as long as you and all these wonderful people keep reading them!!  I appreciate the comments.  






Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats
Lone Wolf
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14 posted 07-20-2000 08:00 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf


OOPS!!!!!  Ceres got me!!!  



[This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 07-21-2000).]
Lone Wolf
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15 posted 07-20-2000 08:01 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf


CUT THAT OUT CERES!!!!!!!!  ROFL

Sorry everyone!!

[This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 07-21-2000).]
ethome
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Hey Lone Wolf, in my mind I'm glad you are posting your wonderful flowing compositions here.....This is very well done with that old haunting memory coming round again....... take care......ethome
Jeffrey Carter
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17 posted 07-20-2000 08:29 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Jenn, Glad you felt you had to thank us 3 times     LMAO
Lone Wolf
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18 posted 07-21-2000 04:59 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

ethome . . . Thank you very much as I am glad you post here too.  

Jeff . . . HOW'D THAT HAPPEN??  ROFL.  


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats
Elizabeth Santos
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19 posted 07-21-2000 05:41 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Wonderful poem. The theme is excellent, something I never thought of, but peace always comes in the end
Very beautiful
Liz
Lone Wolf
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20 posted 07-21-2000 08:22 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Liz,

Thank you for reading.  Just came to me one day and I finally did something with it.  Yes, peace always comes in the end.  So true.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats
Yu Lan
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21 posted 07-25-2000 03:03 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

Lone Wolf, this has to be my favourite poem of all yours! (of the ones I have read) Hehe, sorry, I haven't replied to most of them, but I have read more than I let on.. *_^
I love this.. "In my mind.." I really think you should submitt this one for the book.. I like this better than your My Heart Hears one that u submitted (nono, that one is good too, hehe.. just this is better.. *_^)

Loved this!!

Luv,


Lynne

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juliet_2u
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22 posted 07-25-2000 04:36 AM       View Profile for juliet_2u   Email juliet_2u   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juliet_2u

LW, what a powerful piece. Thank goodness that the mind can finally take over the heart when needed. Truly beautiful writing.
      Juls
TerryW
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23 posted 07-25-2000 10:34 AM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Lone Wolf~
     My friend, this is just wonderful.  I love it!  Thank yo for sharing it with me.


Love Ya~

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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Yu Lan . . . Thanks, I will consider that.  

Juls . . . I agree 100%!!!  Thank you for the reply.  

Terry . . . You are welcome my friend!!  Happy to share!!!  



Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats
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