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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2000-07-19 11:47 PM


It started innocently
   enough.
Just your name, like
   a distant wind,
Blowing through the
   pathways of my mind.
Teasing me with the
   image of your green eyes,
Twinkling with laughter,
   glowing with passion.
And my mind wanders
   the paths, exploring
Calling up the taste
   of your lips
After a bite of the
   apple.
The feel of your arms, warm
   against winters cold breathe.
The scent of your body
   after a passion filled night.
Your name, just your
   name.
This way lies madness.
  
  


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never say never

[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 07-20-2000).]

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Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-07-19 11:53 PM


hey----- my eyes are brown---lol

Very nicely written..

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
2 posted 2000-07-20 11:01 AM


Well Jamie...isnt that what I said? Teasing me with the image of your brown eyes? There you go. Thanks guy.

never say never

poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
3 posted 2000-07-20 11:14 AM


"calling up the taste of your lips after a
bite of the apple"
Snow white never had it this good! Loved it!

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
4 posted 2000-07-20 11:59 PM


poutprincess...ahhh but Snow White didnt have my prince....

never say never

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