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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Invisible Costumes Invisible yet palatable jagged pieces torn fabric of family too ragged to repair, mismatched patches craft ill fitting attire. So we start anew with fresh clothes, turning to admire strange new selves mirroring pasts, harboring futures, holding unseen hands. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Corinne, as always you paint images that leave me in awe. Vivid and wonderful. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Invisible yet palatable jagged pieces torn fabric of family too ragged to repair, mismatched patches craft ill fitting attire. ============= mirroring pasts, harboring futures, holding unseen hands. =============== perfect C, you write a part of my past in this. as always... you do this with such ease of word choices and imagery take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you for your kind words, Brian and Janet Marie. Corinne |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I enjoy your work and your skill to capture so much in your words is amazing. Thank you for sharing this touching piece~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
mirroring pasts, harboring futures, holding unseen hands ...... I am delighted to read such poetry... simple words... easy looks... but way profound in depth.... Corinne, I am always amazed and dazed by the clarity and sharpness of images in your thoughts... regards, sudhir |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Many thanks, Butterflies and Sudhir. Not as much time to write now, so poems have to be whipped out rather than cultivated, which bothers me, but we do what we have to. Guess it is better than quitting entirely! Corinne |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Corinne~ WOW! This is excellent......  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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HerMelness Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 37Bridgewater, NS, Canada |
This is really nice.. you simplify things so well! You make it seem so easy! I wish I had that skill =) Excellent work! -Mel- -Wherever you go, go with all your heart.- |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
if this is what comes when just "whipping it out" I should try that myself. nice one, Core. Rick |
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