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Whispered On The Wind
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Whispered On The Wind |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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I heard your name whispered on the wind ~ like a long ago sigh ~ and I took the time (again) to wonder why I questioned myself but got the same old reply I have no idea why you said goodbye I heard your name whispered on the wind ~ a reminder of days gone by ~ held my heart and let myself cry I cried for memories those shared ~ those that will never be I cried for the loss of you and me I heard your name whispered on the wind ~ felt my spirits fly ~ I made peace with the past and told your memory goodbye. -SEA- Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I heard your name whispered on the wind ~ felt my spirits fly ~ I made peace with the past and told your memory goodbye. SEA, a beautiful piece, yes it is hard to say goodbye. Enjoyed reading this.  why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SEA-gator this is LOVELY perfect love the repetition... and phrasing beautiful emotions expressed as well later-whisper-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely sentiments...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA, my friend~ Welcome the warm breezes that blow a sweet memory into your waiting remember. It is a special feeling, isn't it ? You did a wonderful job of letting the memories take control and waft gently through this piece. Sometimes we've just 'gotta tell it like it is ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Memories seem to flow back like a whisper on the wind. Very well written, nicely flowing work. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Brian~ thank you so much for the warm reply Janet~Thank you! James~ thanks Marge~yes, it is very special, and once the tears dry, the heart heals. Ethome~ I agree, thank you -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SEA . . . This was beautiful writing. I just love the end. Making peace with the past is the only way we can truly say good-bye. Have a tissue for those tears. Hope to catch up with you soon on icq. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sea* This is absolutely perfection! I felt every line clear to my soul...such beauty in your words from the painful beginning to the hopeful end~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
SEA.... The words are so beautiful..... "I heard your name whispered on the wind.." I can almost hear it myself. I think the ending really was perfect... it is so very hard to say goodbye to a memory..... ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LW~Thanks, I think you have to make peace before you can truly move on....see ya on ICQ BDC~ thank you very much. Sunny1~ thank you, it's very hard to let go..... -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Liked this a lot. Corinne |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I heard your name whispered on the wind ~ like a long ago sigh ~ and I took the time (again) to wonder why These words are straight from my heart. My problem was that I answered the call of the wind four different times over a number of years and yes each time she said good-bye after only a short time. She has always known that I would come to her when she asked but now I need to find a way to say no and that is not easy. Wonderful write. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Beautifully touching... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
We all hear those whispers from time to time...they are good for us...lets us know that there was love so there can be again never say never |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was so touching and tender SEA ... straight from a heart whose mending ... beautiful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Corinne~ I'm glad, thank you Mark~ Thank you Sunshine~ thanks Paula~ thank you Kit~ thanks -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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