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Michael G
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-19 05:54 PM


I know you still haunt me
Letting go of my soul.
Of all the days that we wasted
When we wanted some control.
Have you ever loved another
The way that I love you now,
Have you ever let your mind go
Trusting it to my hold.

I know you still haunt me
Of times I wasted away,
From distant lands we were taken
To live our lives this day.
Have you ever held another
The way I held you then
In the bed, under both covers
So the world could not come in.

Can't you see the begining
Of a lifetime of change
That begins when you open
Your heart to me today.
Just open up your arms
And feel the strength that we gained,
From having one another
Through this turmoil and the pain.

© Copyright 2000 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-07-19 06:02 PM


Michael G......

    I love reading your writings. You have
    a touch of elegance that comes through
    and makes what you write so......
            'passionate'........

       Please keep writing more like this!!


~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment



Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-07-19 06:05 PM


Have you ever loved another
The way that I love you now,
Have you ever let your mind go
Trusting it to my hold.
I know you still haunt me
Of times I wasted away,
From distant lands we were taken
To live our lives this day.
Have you ever held another
The way I held you then
In the bed, under both covers
So the world could not come in.

===============
absolutely perfect Michael...
jm

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