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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-19 12:50 PM


Do you watch the moon like I,
Do you watch it with your mind,
Do you whisper to it your favorite prayer
The one you wish that I was there.

Do you laugh at the light it gives,
The glow of souls that dance and move,
The hearts that race without a care
Or do you follow my secret ways.

Do you look upon the moon and say
I love you dear in my own way,
And hope that one day comes again
Yes, listen and you'll hear my prayer.

© Copyright 2000 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
1 posted 2000-07-19 04:18 PM


I do! I do! I do love this poem...wonderful work!!
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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Michigan
2 posted 2000-07-19 04:32 PM


Written with love, A beautiful piece~
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-07-19 06:02 PM


Do you laugh at the light it gives,
The glow of souls that dance and move,
The hearts that race without a care
Or do you follow my secret ways.
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wow Michael,
this is beautiful
*swooning here*
how tender and lovely
very nice read indeed
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

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