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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2000-07-19 09:42 AM



                Love me now........
   Come feel the gentle beating of my heart..

                Talk to me.........
        Say that we will never be apart..

                Touch my lips......
       Taste the sweet desire of my wine..

                We will be.........
   As one throughout this life and for all time..

----------------------------------------------------

            Does anybody know how long
               tomorrow's going to
                     be?
            Is somewhere there a guiding
               light to shine for
                   you and me?
            And if there is a never,
               than what is
                   forever for?
            I can't love you any less
                     but
               I can give you more....

----------------------------------------------------

                 Take my love.......
       Let me cause your cup to overflow..
                
                 Look at me.........
       In my eyes you'll see our sweet love
                   grow..

                 Nourish me.........
       and I will feed your soul throughout
                  all time..

                 Love me now........
           and know that I am yours,
                    and
                    You
                        are
                            mine....


~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment



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Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2000-07-19 09:47 AM


Sunny1,
These words flow from your heart, and you write them so tenderly and with much feeling. It is a pleasure to read what you write, and I look forward to the next.      

"Love me now........
and know that I am yours,

and

You
are
mine...."

Phew, Whew, and WOW!!!!!!!

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-07-19 09:50 AM



  Thank you, Bill. Do you remember what
  you said about writing more romantic
  poems?
       Well, thank you for the inspiration!!



~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment



Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
3 posted 2000-07-19 10:34 AM


~Sunny1...This was brilliant...This was so loving and inspirational...It makes me want to fall in love all over again....~
poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
4 posted 2000-07-19 11:17 AM


I agree with Beth...this makes me feel like falling in love all over again, too!
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
5 posted 2000-07-19 04:24 PM


Beth and PoutPrincess......

       It's OK!! The world needs more people
  to fall in love all over again!!!

             Thank you for reading!!


~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment



Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

6 posted 2000-07-19 07:57 PM


Love me now........
                                             Come feel the gentle beating of my heart..

                                             Talk to me.........
                                           Say that we will never be apart..

                                             Touch my lips......
                                             Taste the sweet desire of my wine..

                                             We will be.........
                                             As one throughout this life and for all time..

"Sighhhh"
Loved it Sunny  

ma miller
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

7 posted 2000-07-19 08:11 PM


Does anybody know how long tomorrow's going to be?

this is one of those "I wish I had written that" phrases (and i do) ... nice work.
            

Trew
Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Ottawa, Canada
8 posted 2000-07-20 09:30 PM


Sunny1, this is great romance!
Gentle, but strong, just like love itself!

Gemini
Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA
9 posted 2000-07-20 09:34 PM


Sunny1-Very beautiful, full of love and tenderness.
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