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You can count on Me
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You can count on Me |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You can count on Me God please shower your blessings down on me as you have done so many times before because I really truly honestly don't want to be alone anymore. This time it will be different I promise I won't screw up like I've done everytime before because I really truly honestly don't want to be alone anymore. I'll be the good guy you just watch and see and soon enough you'll laugh and smile knowing you can count on me. Please don't judge me by my past all those times I chased them out the door cause I really truly honestly don't want to be alone anymore. Every problem has a solution and in this case it's me cause now I promise to work out every disagreement between my sweetheart and me. In fact I would even stick around forever if we could only agree that two can share so much more and together we will never be alone anymore cause she can count on me. Jameslee@July18,2000 |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
James, As I read this I felt the tears well up in my eyes. I know the feeling well my friend. Just remember that one day you will find love again and when you do these times will make you appreciate it that much more  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
James, "I really truly honestly" felt the sincerity with which you wrote this piece...your heart is true, my friend. Take care of it. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
James, I could always trust you to pen such a beauty with words so sincere... Moved me a lot, this one... Take Care, my friend, Regards, sudhir |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
James, I sense through what you have written that your words are true. And may you become empty of the loniness that you must feel. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, this really beautiful! You pen your emotions so beauitifully, my friend. Your time will come......I know it will. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is so touching James......a heart felt plea, we would do anything for love when it's right. Great writing~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
James, this was wonderful writing my friend. Your day will come and it will be glorious. I think you deserve the happiness that you seek. Best wishes!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Jeffrey, Claire, Sudhir, Bill, Marina, Butterfly, and Lone Wolf for your wonderful responses. The responses reminded me of a beautiful song called "Our Day will Come". It goes something like this.."Our Day will come when we'll have everything...we'll find the joy that falling in love can bring." I am waiting for that beautiful day...the key words "OUR" and "WE"...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh how this touched my heart...wanting to be someones everything...I know the feeling well |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
to be able to count on someone is a gift of each ..one in accepting and the other in giving...your time will come ~~softly Maureen |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Paula and Maureen for your wonderful comments. Maureen your words have an impact on me...James |
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