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Beth
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since 2000-07-06
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0 posted 2000-07-19 02:44 AM



Gone away so long
Makes the feelings
strong.
I miss so much
Like your loving
touch.
The whispers in
my ear
Just to have you
near.
Laying in my bed
With nothing that needs
to be said.
Caressing my skin
Its not a sin.
Holding me so near
Your breathe in my
ear.
Our fingers entwine,
You saying
That your mine.
Dreaming of our kiss
Feeling Im in sweet
bliss.
Wishing that tomorrow
wont come
Knowing inside that we
are one.
Your going to be back
soon
I only have to wait for
the new moon.
Thats not long away
I already know what
Im going to say.
I'll say
"I Love You So"
You'll say
"I already know".



[This message has been edited by Beth (edited 07-19-2000).]

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gem
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1 posted 2000-07-19 03:48 AM


It's such a good feeling knowing that someone really loves you!! I really like it!!



Beth
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2 posted 2000-07-19 06:24 AM


~Gem, Thankyou for your reply...I think we all like to know that we are loved. Im glad you liked it~
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3 posted 2000-07-19 06:28 AM


Beth, may I offer a late wecome to Passions

I think for sure that you have been peeking into my heart. This reflects a sentiment that is very close to home  

[This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 07-19-2000).]

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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4 posted 2000-07-19 06:30 AM


Another beauty from you my friend.  Loved it.
Beth
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since 2000-07-06
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5 posted 2000-07-19 08:56 AM


~jeffrey, maybe I could get more peeks into your heart-I need the inspiration (lol)...Thankyou for your sweet reply~

~Mark, You always make me smile seeing your name here..Thankyou so much~

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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6 posted 2000-07-19 09:14 AM


Beth....

      This is truly a beautiful love poem,
  and I liked the ending here,
           '....I already know....'

            Thank you for sharing
                this one....


~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment



Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
7 posted 2000-07-19 10:22 AM


~Sunny1, Thankyou for your reply. Im glad you liked it~
Bill Charles
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8 posted 2000-07-19 04:29 PM


Beth,
Another poem to add to the rest of them. I can feel your heart as it crys for a touch. Very nice, very nice indeed.

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