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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-07-19 02:12 AM


As you walk past I pretend
I don't see you.
But I am quite sure you feel
my green eyes on you watching your every
move.
As you turn around our eyes connect
you melt into me with such an ease
such a gentleness comes over you.
I can see you in every angle I have to take you
in my green eyes.
The way you walk makes me react
with such a look that only
you can see.
For these green eyes are looking
straight into your heart
from which I know they will
never part.


© Copyright 2000 Rose - All Rights Reserved
gem
Junior Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 39

1 posted 2000-07-19 04:04 AM


I find that I can relate to this poem because I too have green eyes!! Good one!!!!
Gem



Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-07-19 10:42 PM


people often tell me how my eyes seem to say so many things. I guess my eyes are the mirror to my soul. Eyes often do transcend how we feel about another. thx for reply.
Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-07-19 11:05 PM



Wonderful work RB, the eyes are the window
to the soul...and the eyes don't lie   Much
enjoyed!

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