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Touch me |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Touch me Touch me The way a rain drop caresses a leaf The way it clings on to the edge Becomes part of it Touch me The way the rays of the sun enter a forest Hugging the trees Reaching deep within it Touch me The way the oceans envelop the land Embracing the shores Quenching all of it Touch me Become part of me Reach deep within me Quenching all of me Touch me The way I want to touch you Touch me |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
fantastic work! i could see,hear,smell,and feel every word of this. very much enjoyed. |
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gem Junior Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 39 |
I loved your poem, kat. It makes me feel as though I could close my eyes and run my fingers across an oil painting...feeling all the textures with my minds eye. Gem |
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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
kat- I like this. very sensual and romantic in an earthy way. I like the way you weave together the elements of the world with the power of a touch. Beautiful. "We have all these galaxies inside of us. And if we don't enter those in art, then I don't understand the point in doing anything."-Sam Shepard |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
This is lovely kat.. Makes me want to reach out and touch someone!  Great work! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wow talk about waking up the senses with just a simple touch. This is beautiful and I love the way you wrapped it all so perfectly. |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
poutprincess: I'm glad you enjoyed it and that you were able to sense every word. Thank-you!  gem: Thanks! I'm glad you were able to feel it. jennie may: I feel nature is very sensual. I'm happy you enjoyed this. Thanks! MysticalNights: If you feel like touching someone, go ahead and do it. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks! Mark: A touch can truly wake up all the senses. So happy you enjoyed it. Thanks! kat [This message has been edited by kat (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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