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Collins
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since 2000-03-28
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0 posted 2000-07-18 09:03 PM


Take me to the willow tree,
Where we first made our vows.
Remember what i ment to you,
and what you feel right now.

Kiss me 'neath the willow tree,
and watch the clouds go by.
Listen to the blackbirds song,
and watch them as they fly.

Bury me neath the willow tree,
when i pass away.
For i want to know that when i die,
here my heart shall stay.

© Copyright 2000 Collins - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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1 posted 2000-07-18 09:26 PM



This is so tender and beautiful..the idea
itself is great and your weave of words have
made it soar~

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
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2 posted 2000-07-18 09:27 PM


~Oh beautiful!!! How very cool, this poem. I love willow trees. This poem is pleasing in it's reading. Be well Collins. *Peace.
Collins
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3 posted 2000-08-10 09:04 PM


thankyou  
Romy
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Plantation, Florida
4 posted 2000-09-07 12:11 PM


This is a very lovely poem!
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