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ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
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0 posted 2000-07-18 09:55 AM


green secrets ...

grass cut fresh
  do secrets stay kept?

or given away
  before your head's clipped?

who do you tell
  these mysteries so deep?

ants that are crawling
  or beetles that creep?

if secrets to stay
  between you and i

to hear from my lips
  i will deny

please give us a hint
  enigma so strange

to not hear them soon
  i'll be deranged


M.A. Miller
07.17.00

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Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-07-18 09:58 AM


Simple from you is not simple at all.  This is lovely.
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-07-18 10:01 AM


I like this MA--and it reminded me of something a friend told me just yesterday--in a "hang in there" speech--he said, "grass doesn't care if it gets cut down or not, it just keeps growing..."  smiles to you this morn...enjoyed.
Jan
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 114

3 posted 2000-07-18 01:43 PM


Perhaps no so simple!  lovely, I totally enjoyed the read.
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-07-18 02:41 PM


~Hey there MA,...not simple...beautiful. You must have been confused. . Truly enjoyed this and it's little message hiding there in the grass. Be well you. *Peace.
Corazon
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since 2000-02-02
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5 posted 2000-07-18 02:45 PM


like this, funny thing secrets.....did you hear???? lol...great poem  
ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
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6 posted 2000-07-19 12:27 PM


thanks again all for taking time to read ...

a simple poem
i once did write
no big words
for reader's plight
just little ditties
for you to see
'cause simple's best
for simple me

[This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 07-19-2000).]

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