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Ship of Friend
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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You, the beacon in my darkness my lifebuoy you, kept me afloat as I sank deeper within the oceans of sorrow you, rescued me as I drowned circling the tides of confusion, always encouraging me to swim for the shore of crystal clear, into your arms of consolation and I, will warm your wintered days, quiet those howling winds light up the darkest skies with shimmering diamonds bright to capture the fall of your wave-like tears of regret, to motion your sound of laughing as we, sail the ageless ship of friend Dark Angel July 2000 [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 07-18-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Dark Angel..... This is beautiful work.....it flows and is so peaceful. I loved the words but I also enjoyed the graphical layout on the screen. You have a certain touch that is unique.... very nice writing! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
you always warm me with your vivid images. beautiful as usual.. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
MM you sum up what friendship is all about in a truly beautiful poem ... very very well done .. (i'm keeping my fingers off the critique button ..lol) MP |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
WOW Maree - this is excellent! It flows so softly and exudes warmth from the chill - you should submit this to the book. Well done! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Dark Angel* I admire the ability to be able to write in this form. This is beautiful work~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
God girl the beauty and talent your poetry possesses is awsome...go girl  Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sunny, wow thank you so very much for your kind reply Jamie, and you always warm me with your beautiful replies Thank you dear one.MP, "keeping your fingers of the critique button ey? LOL. Thank you for your lovely reply. J, thanks honey for your lovely reply, submit for the book? I have submitted quite a few, I think I'll leave it for the next one BDC, Why, thank you for your most kind reply WOW Tracie, it is so wonderful knowing that you think so..wow, thats a lovely compliment thank you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh, I like this...swim for the shore of crystal clear...and...to motion your sound of laughter...wonderful! Well done! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ The 'Ship of Friend' sets sail from the Port of Heart ... You did a wonderful job with this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Dark Angel, This was beautiful my friend. Your ship proudly sets sail on the seas of life. Great writing!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely breathtaking, Maree! Denise |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is so lovely, so gorgeous my friend...you have a wonderous heart and it shows through in this beautiful piece. *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
cool poem ... nice slide to it ... seductive reading ... thanks |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
so beautifully written ... I can feel your sincerity in every line awesome poem |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hon....this is marvellous. There is such a tender tone to your writing lately. Really well done - I will join Sir P and refrain from pushing...lol hugs K |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellent work! Nothing like the kindness shared between two close friends. Very good writing! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Angel of darkness, Can I land at your well marked port? ... kidding... I loved the images here particularly wintered days, howling winds, shimmering diamonds amongst others... you could easily guess my favorite stanza then ... eh? regards, sudhir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Martie,Marge, Lone Wolf, Denise, Krista, MA Miller, Rex, Kamla, ethome and Sudhir..... Thank you all so very much for your kind replies.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you, rescued me as I drowned circling the tides of confusion, always encouraging me to swim for the shore of crystal clear, into your arms of consolation and I, will warm your wintered days, quiet those howling winds light up the darkest skies with shimmering diamonds bright to capture the fall of your wave-like tears of regret, to motion your sound of laughing as we, sail the ageless ship of friend ==================== this is AWESOME DA... EXCELLENT... take a bow for this one hon... WOW!!!!! loved it... needs to be submitted for book.. going in my library now  jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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ME New Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 9 |
Beautiful |
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