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Beth
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since 2000-07-06
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WA, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-18 08:13 AM



Love you now
Love you tomorrow
Wait today
Wait tomorrow
Would a lifetime of love
Be returned?

© Copyright 2000 Cherie - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-07-18 08:16 AM


Beth.....

       This is a great piece.....I like
       the ending question.....it imparts
       that doubt we all have in matters
       of the heart......


~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment



Beth
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since 2000-07-06
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WA, Australia
2 posted 2000-07-18 08:25 AM



~Sunny1..I think the question is most important..A Lifetime of love probably couldnt be returned but its nice to think..
Thanks for your constant replies..I appreciate them~

Dark Angel
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3 posted 2000-07-18 08:28 AM


Would a lifetime of love be returned?

Good question Beth   Liked this much  

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-07-18 09:52 AM


So much said in so few words and the question is perfect.  Loved it much.
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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Michigan
5 posted 2000-07-18 10:01 AM



So many questions go along with the mystery
of love and so few answers.....Well done~

ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

6 posted 2000-07-18 10:33 AM


love simple ... nice verse, Beth ...
Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
7 posted 2000-07-18 11:27 AM


~Dark Angel, Thankyou for your reply. Im glad you liked it~

~Mark, That is the million dollar question. Thankyou for your sweet reply~

~Butterflies_dont_cry~ Love doesnt seem to provide many answers when you want them (lol). Thanks for your reply~

~MA Miller, Thankyou for your reply. Its good to see that you liked it~

poutprincess
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Perth, Western Australia, Australia
8 posted 2000-07-19 01:03 AM


oops..sorry...double posted!

[This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 07-19-2000).]

poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
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Perth, Western Australia, Australia
9 posted 2000-07-19 01:03 AM


this one just about slipped past me! its great! youve always been good at asking those important questions! youre the best Beth!
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