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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2000-07-17 08:24 PM



      The journey to your door has been
                a long one..
      I've stumbled many times along
                the way..
      It seems like every crossroad was
                the wrong one..
      But I finally made it here,
                I'm glad to say......


      I've always been a loner,
                been a gypsy..
      With never any place to call
                my own..
      No ties, no binds, no love,
                no one to keep me..
      And no regrets for anything
                I've done......


      Together, all these things have brought
                me here to your front door..
      Experience has taught me to take less,
                and give back more..
      The words I write might need some
                tender help from you,
                     my friend..
      But I won't mind,
          Because I'm home,
              My journey's at
                   ~~the end!~~


~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment



© Copyright 2000 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-07-17 09:08 PM


This is beautiful, Sunny! It flows like a song!  

Denise

ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

2 posted 2000-07-17 09:29 PM


agree with DS ... can almost hear someone singing this ... nice.
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-07-18 12:51 PM


Denise and MA......

       I can't fool you two...this will
   probably end up as a song, as that's
   what I do for a living....play music.
       I thank you for reading it, and
           it's much appreciated!


~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment



Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
4 posted 2000-07-18 12:55 PM


That was beautiful, as always. I always look forward to reading yours.

Sauni

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2000-07-18 09:15 PM


Sunny1,
A touch of Sunny1 I sense in her writing. Pieces of life, as you journey down your trail. Love reading your words, meaningful, touching, and from the self. Keep writing Sunny1.

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