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LoveBug
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0 posted 2000-07-17 05:52 PM


Days slowly float by
Each more painful than the last
Living with heartbreak


"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2000-07-17 05:56 PM


LoveBug ... very well done
and it says it all too

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
2 posted 2000-07-17 06:16 PM


I agree, that just about covers it. Well done!

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



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In the space between moments
3 posted 2000-07-18 12:02 PM


Wonderful my friend!  Deep sorrow in so few words....you've got the knack for this too!   Keep them up!

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

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State of constant confusion!
4 posted 2000-07-18 12:11 PM


Yup, I agree with the rest
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5 posted 2000-07-18 12:15 PM


LoveBug* This is great work......you rode the wave like a pro  
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