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You there My first try at a Haiku

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Justbleu
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0 posted 07-17-2000 02:42 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Deep within myself
Watching over me, all time
There in all your ways


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown




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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...


1 posted 07-17-2000 06:44 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Some deep (no pun intented) feelings expressed in few words. I like!

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 07-17-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

this is lovely
the ideals instilled by those that care
always guiding our steps

Sunnyone
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3 posted 07-17-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

Justbleu....

      Your Haiku is great!
      For another I will wait
      I will be patient!!

   Haiku is such fun.....hope you didn't
       mind a little Haiku-to-you!!


~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment


Justbleu
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4 posted 07-21-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thank You...you three!!!  
Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown
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5 posted 07-21-2000 11:51 AM       View Profile for MMoonchild   Email MMoonchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit MMoonchild's Home Page   View IP for MMoonchild

Deep within myself
Watching over me, all time
There in all your ways
~~~~

On your shoulder, too
An angel watches over
Always there for you

Haikus are wonderful ways to express in so few words...yours was inspiring,Justbleu

~~soft thanks
Maureen
Mark Bohannan
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Great first attempt. I will have to do these one of these days.(I keep telling myself that)  Loved it.
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Brave, strong and witty
My knight in shining armour
Secure little me

And your haiku was an excellent first attempt
Justbleu
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8 posted 07-23-2000 09:45 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Haikus are fun...I can tell...they are soo short too!!  Thanks guys for your comments and your Haikus!!!  
Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 07-23-2000 09:53 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Why this is
JustBleu-tiful !


~*Marge*~



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nice
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