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You there My first try at a Haiku
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You there My first try at a Haiku |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Deep within myself Watching over me, all time There in all your ways < !signature--> "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 07-17-2000).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Some deep (no pun intented) feelings expressed in few words. I like! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
this is lovely the ideals instilled by those that care always guiding our steps  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Justbleu.... Your Haiku is great! For another I will wait I will be patient!! Haiku is such fun.....hope you didn't mind a little Haiku-to-you!! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You...you three!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Deep within myself Watching over me, all time There in all your ways ~~~~ On your shoulder, too An angel watches over Always there for you Haikus are wonderful ways to express in so few words...yours was inspiring,Justbleu ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Great first attempt. I will have to do these one of these days.(I keep telling myself that) Loved it. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Brave, strong and witty My knight in shining armour Secure little me And your haiku was an excellent first attempt |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Haikus are fun...I can tell...they are soo short too!! Thanks guys for your comments and your Haikus!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Why this is JustBleu-tiful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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