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vandana
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0 posted 2000-07-17 12:00 PM



Now I 've come to you,
Now I'll make you laugh,
When I am loving you,
Now this is the right time,
When the stars are so bright,
Now I'll hold you ,
Now I will tell you
how much I really love you,
So,now,
My love,
come closer to me,
Let me tell you
the things I wanted to say
For a long time,
I've waited for this dat to come,
Now ,
The night is young and cold,
Let me tell you
Three words,
you don't know
how you feel for me,
Whenever I'm with you,
I feel so lost,
wanted you to know,
Love is in your eyes,
Now,
We're together,
And we're meant to be,
Now the time is so
right
The stars are so bright,
Now,
Time 've come to tell you,
I love you ,
Now,
The time has come
To tell you
How much I love you,


[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 07-17-2000).]

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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-07-17 01:43 PM


Another pretty poem from you vandana...

lovely emotions and well written...


regards, sudhir

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
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2 posted 2000-07-17 11:37 PM


vandana, you never cease to amaze me with the depth of your writing. . .

Simply wonderful my friend. . .simply wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-07-17 11:45 PM



There is no better time than Now   I enjoyed
this~

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