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Kyle aka Huck
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since 2000-07-16
Posts 63
Linn, MO USA

0 posted 2000-07-17 04:16 AM


I'm a poor child,
Life all so wild.
17 and I'm told,
I have a heart of gold.
If that's true then answer me this,
Why is my life an endless abyss?
No where to run,
Got to escape the burning sun.
No where to hide,
I'm taken for the lonliest ride.
Divorce did my Mom and Dad,
Makes me so so sad.
Confused as am I,
Hard enough I did not try.
And you don't see,
That you ignore me.
And you don't see,
I need you both with me.
You just don't see...
How much this affects ME.
You can't see....


© Copyright 2000 Kyle Finn - All Rights Reserved
Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
1 posted 2000-07-17 04:21 AM



~I cant say I know what your going through but i can imagine...My heart goes out to you..I hope everything works out well for you too..This was very sweet.. Enjoyed it greatly~

poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
2 posted 2000-07-17 05:42 AM


although i can not relate to the divorce aspect, i do understand a child's need for love and attention from their parents. you write your emotions so well...be sure that you are able to share these same feelings with you mom and dad...make sure they hear you. and i'll be here listening as well.
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-07-17 05:44 AM


well, dear, how could we not?
This is nice....I thank you for sharing and welcome...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-07-17 07:12 AM


My wife divorced me and took off with my three sons and it was a very stressful period of time for everyone involved.  I was able to visit them but it is not the same as having the family together...still have sad memories today as I am sure they have...you can only do the best that you can under the circumstances...hope you are doing o.k...    James
Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
5 posted 2000-07-17 11:44 PM


mom hears and understands more than you give her credit for i bet

never say never

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
6 posted 2000-07-17 11:59 PM



A soul filled piece...life at 17 never seems
easy but you have many added bumps in your
road...my condolences for the recent loss of
your friend...Big ((Hugs)) for this piece
and for this difficult time in your
life~

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