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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2000-07-17 02:13 AM



Moonlights Swoon

Moonlight rays reflect
On lazy mirrored lagoon
And croaking frogs swoon


Dark Angel




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 07-17-2000).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-17 02:19 AM


DarkAngel~
*Swooning* here over the sheer
beauty of this lovely Haiku.
~*Marge*~


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tracie66
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2 posted 2000-07-17 02:26 AM


DA~
Lovely
What a swoony moony haiku
loved it
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe


Dark Angel
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3 posted 2000-07-17 08:18 AM


Marge and Tracie, thanks so much for your wonderful replies   glad you liked  
Severn
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4 posted 2000-07-17 10:07 AM


Hey hon, you're getting pretty good at these things...

K

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2000-07-17 11:16 AM


Dark angel,
Rebeep, rebeep, swoon. Very nice.

Elizabeth
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6 posted 2000-07-17 11:20 AM


Ribbit, ribbit...a beautiful haiku, Dark Angel!

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



Jamie
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7 posted 2000-07-17 01:13 PM


The swooning frogs sing
of how magical words kiss
make them feel princely



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Justbleu
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8 posted 2000-07-17 02:48 PM


This is cool!!!  
Bridgette


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EagleOne
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9 posted 2000-07-17 06:32 PM


Very good!

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



Dark Angel
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10 posted 2000-07-18 09:29 AM


Hey SB,Thank ya very much!  

Seymour...ReBeep back at ya!   Thank you for cute reply  

Elizabeth...ribbit ribbit...Thank you   glad you liked.

Jamie, such a beautiful reply   Thank you my friend  

Justbleu, Thank you so much  

EagleOne, Thank you  


Dennis L. White
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11 posted 2000-07-18 11:27 AM


D_Angel,
  A delightful Haiku! Well Done!
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Jamie
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12 posted 2000-07-18 07:28 PM


I don't know how many book submissions you have but......God I Love This Poem....
''what do you think????''

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


WhtDove
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13 posted 2000-07-21 11:14 PM


They took my Ribbit!!    LOL

Your good at these DA!!
Keep writin em'      

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