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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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No more do I seek out these ill faded dreams For even in life, love is not what it seems A kiss on your lips or a touch of you hand Means nothing, if you don’t tell me where I stand Is your heart now with me or still stuck in the past While you lie silently do you think of your last Yeah, you told me you'd hurt me, but that’s nothing new Every day has been hurtful since falling for you And maybe I’m helpless, and your not to blame A victim naive, in this grand ****ed up game Still all things considered, just one remains true I know what I want, and I wish you did too. -Its not quite that simple, I'm afraid you will find, for a mind maker upper to make up their mind- Doctor Suess |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kevin you have written such a perfect description of the same thing I am going thru right this very moment...I simply backed away...time for both of us to think this out...and become in touch with our feelings...now I am going thru an emotional hell..but I still feel like I am doing the right thing...Wish the best for you...James |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Love is so bittersweet...and this poem conveys that in a beautiful and touching way. once again..youve done a great job! |
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Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
I know how ya feel man, I'm goin thru that right now too, try not to let it bring ya down though brah, you gotta stay strong and think of whatcha still got.... |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
I dont know wether to be happy or sad that you guys have identified with this, im glad i can somehow put words to what we are feeling but this is by far not the best time of my life, nobody should have to go through this Id like to agree huck, but what I have might not be what I want = |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
The wizard of words once again! I think everyone has been in this position at sometime or another Kevin. Hang on and hope for the best. Good Luck, Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Kevin If yopu read some of my work, you may be fooled into thinking that it has always been wonderful. But I can tell you that there were times when I felt just like this. However, I was lucky, or maybe I just refused to give up....but now I am happier than I everdreamed I could be. Hang on in there. John Love is like the mumps.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~This is really 'In your face'. I love it.. Love certainly is bitter at times isnt it but I hope things have gotten better for you..This was a great way of saying what needed to be said..~ |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Wizard I am not =( mar, maybe just a sorcerors apprentice, im hanging =) You bring hope john thanks I noticed that too beth, i guess i feel really strongly and it transfered onto the page =) |
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