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0 posted 2000-07-16 11:45 PM


Breeze from the moon,
Sends the message of your coming soon,
Kiss from your fire,
My heart intone with this desire,
Sitting by this lonesome bay,
My eyes looking your way,
Turning of the tides,
Knowing that time is on my side
As I turn to my rear,
Your captivating smell is getting nearer,
Cupid has struck me with his arrow for sure,
This disease of love now only you can cure.



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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ChChrissieCe
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1 posted 2000-07-16 11:49 PM


I think that you did a great job expressing your feelings!  How old are you?

~*~Chrissie~*~

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2 posted 2000-07-17 12:12 PM


I am 19. Why?

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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