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Goodbye to the Sun
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Goodbye to the Sun |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
theres nothing left to say i fought...i lost now my heart is an empty shell hard and brittle on the ground left behind out of fear used for what purpose i dont understand all my faith abandoned all my dreams denied because you wont let go of a past that was a lie so i say goodbye to the sun to live once more in the dark broken hearted and disillusioned pushed out beyond the pale for a fantasy love. never say never |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I know where this came from and I also heard from a little bird that the sun is shining again at your house...Nice read and glad that the storm is disipating.  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Very sad paula...hope in time you get through this and live to shine once more Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mark...yes the sun is shining for me. Tracie...just a momentary cloud on the horizon but thanks never say never |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Heart felt work Paula.....your words are always very powerful to me..your gift is amazing and I'm very thankful that you have chosen to share it~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Butterflies...thank you coming from one who uses words like you do that is a great compliment never say never |
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