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Cause and Effect - for Leo
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Cause and Effect - for Leo |
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Madelaine New Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 1Massachusetts |
You cause me to sparkle and shine like the stars with your smile, your flesh, and all that you are. You cause me to play and laugh like a child while making me feel safe all the while. You cause me to love me for all that I am my faults and insecurities melt in your hands. You cause me to tingle every time that you kiss me, my heart skips a beat when you tell me you miss me. You cause me to love you by being your best. Now we know the cause, let's enjoy the effect. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Madelaine~ Welcome to Passion's. This is a cute poem with a lovely stanza that I liked - 'You cause me to love you by being your best. Now we know the cause, let's enjoy the effect.' Hope we'll see more from you. Enjoy yourself and feel free to comment on the poetry of others. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to passions. Very nice poem! You will like it here very much. I'm new here but after 375 posts I feel right at home and I try to do my best to comment on the work of others. I don't post here without sampling the word wares of the other poets, there are some fine poets here and you will learn a lot from them. Hope to read more of your work soon........ethome....... |
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