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Very first haiku
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Very first haiku |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
My anger is gone though my regrets trivial I have found moments. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perfect 5-7-5 MG.. very cool ... perfect expression of emotion.. Ive yet to try one of these.. i have trouble being poetically brief (Im too long winded)  maybe I'll try one... yours inspires me... later-poet-gator jm< !signature--> There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 07-17-2000).] |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Excellent. You packed a lot in there!  |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A wonderful first haiku, my friend. I always admire haiku writers, because they say so much in just three lines. You do a great job of this. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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