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Jacques Lee
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since 2000-07-16
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0 posted 2000-07-16 01:23 PM


Forever Burning Flame


The generous things that you say and do, have

earned a special place in my heart.

So nice a feeling or a thought even though we are

so far apart.

A sad feeling of wanting you near suddenly brings

about a tear.

A tear without fear of being hurt falling upon my

face.

But a tear of happiness.

A meaning, a true meaning; to give and receive.

To cherish, always and forever, what it is we both

have to give.

The love within us, buried so deep.

Surfacing once again, now a burning flame to burn

forever.

Burning to brighten the darkest night.

To see you from within brings about a change.

A change that comes over me; for the better; surely

you can see.

Thinking…  Admiring…  The fire from the flames

burning within me; so good a feeling.

A meaning, a true meaning, to give and receive…

I am hoping the heat from the flames last forever.

I forever want them to last with you.




© Copyright 2000 James Lee - All Rights Reserved
insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

1 posted 2000-07-17 06:21 PM


This is a beautiful poem about the love flame that
burned before now again within rekindled to burn forever.

Welcome to passions


Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-07-17 07:38 PM



I hope that flame will burn brightly for
you forever, Jacques......

      I love your writing with it's
      sensitivity and beautiful emotion!!


~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~
taste every single moment



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-07-22 06:10 AM


Hi Jacques Lee welcome to Passions...this is James Lee...this is tender writing...I believe admiration is very important in a relationship as it motivates us to continue learning about the one we admire...James
Jacques Lee
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since 2000-07-16
Posts 9

4 posted 2000-07-22 01:42 PM


I wish to thank each of you for your kind words.  Often time we find ourselves searching for something and that something may never be found.  However, when we do find that special something, we surely want it to last.  Again, thank you.  J.
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