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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2000-07-16 11:00 AM



               Time....
         Passes by they say
             that night
         follows every day
               You live
         for the time when night
         brings true love your
               way....


               Love
         has a tender touch that
               You
         want to give so much
               Your heart
         may be talked into a
         love at first sight..
         Somewhere, on some
               night....


               Just be sure..
         when you give your heart
               to somebody new..
         that it's right..
               and they give
         their heart to you..
               Take some time..
         flowers look their best
               when still on
                  the vine..
         Love will find your heart
                 in Time....


               Wait..
         for that special one
               you'll meet..
         soon your dreams will
               be complete
         You'll have everything
               that lovers all
                  Share..
               you will be
                  there..
         And love will find your
                  heart
                 in Time....



Live for today and enjoy the moment.....


© Copyright 2000 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
1 posted 2000-07-16 11:47 AM



~I really really like this one...Oh,I like the idea very much...~

Marsha
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
2 posted 2000-07-16 01:13 PM


Simply and beautifully perfection. ....... Words fail me this was sheer poetry.Wow  
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2000-07-16 01:19 PM


Good things come to those with the patience to wait, even in love. Very wise words Sunny
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
4 posted 2000-07-16 02:48 PM


i thought I'd found the real thing...that it was MY time...guess not
JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
5 posted 2000-07-16 02:52 PM


i liked this.....very well expressed,,,

Julie :)



Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
6 posted 2000-07-16 03:43 PM



  Beth.....
           My hope in sharing this one was
   that someone would feel the message....
   If you did, then I succeeded! Thank you!

  Marsha...
           I wrote this to myself a few
   years ago....to slow myself down....
           Thank you for your kind words!

  ethome...
           Waiting is hard, but you are
           so right!!  Thank you.......

  Paula....
           My friend, I know your heart
           by your words, and I also know
           that a heart like yours will
           be blessed by a special love.
                It just takes time...

  JulieAnn..
           I hope it put a smile on your
           face.....that's the greatest
           joy in sharing....

               Thank you all!!


Live for today and enjoy the moment.....


vandana
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Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
7 posted 2000-08-16 06:22 PM


Sunny1,you always impress me by your poetry
Just think I'm your biggest fan of all.Love your poetry.Keep writing I'll keep reading it as always

Jamie
Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
8 posted 2000-10-19 12:59 PM


     Time was
Love was
     Time passed
Love passed
living ceased

     Love touched
Love took
     Time stopped
seeing ended

     flowers wilt
dreams die
  before i love again
so will i

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started to post this on its own, but it really is a reply to this one sunny----
- i don't know why, but these thoughts ran through my mind as  i read it..





Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



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