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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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0 posted 2000-07-16 10:16 AM


serenity shall weep no more--
at least not on this day.
play my heart
just like a harp?
Concerto
shall not end this way.

Mercury shall be direct
planets move
and tides shall ebb...
time I have
and time I'll prove
as spider weaves his sticky web.

And think you not
no witch's curse
as Karma tends
what I forgave...
remember yet,
witch's pet,
you got back what you gave.

© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
1 posted 2000-07-16 10:44 AM


This is good Serenity,
Reads like a witches spell being woven.
Rich

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-07-16 11:12 AM


Mercury shall be direct
planets move
and tides shall ebb...
time I have
and time I'll prove
as spider weaves his sticky web.

And think you not
no witch's curse
as Karma tends
what I forgave...
remember yet,
witch's pet,
you got back what you gave.

--------------------
my my my ...
mercury retrograde has got nothing on you, me twin...
*lighting candles*
me thinks there is an eclipse coming  
*winkie winkie*
later-good-witch of the south-gator  
me


There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-07-16 11:27 AM


Serenity......

     "..as Karma tends what I forgave.."

    This is very, very good, my friend.
    I love wording here.........

            Nice job, indeed......


Live for today and enjoy the moment.....


serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-07-16 11:16 PM


I thank you all muchly...not an incantation...oooh..I promise,,,lol.
Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-07-16 11:56 PM


serenity,
         glad to hear that this isn't a incantation. . . almost made me grab something to guard against it!!

Excellent. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

6 posted 2000-07-17 01:10 AM


too cool ... (love your stuff)
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