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Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
Dreams now crushed, Things i may have rushed. Love is in the air, Without her, I cannot bare. With her there is no fear, There never was a single tear. Like a hunter from the darkest wild, She makes me feel like a child. All my life in dispair, Now someone shows they care. An angel from the heavens above, Reminds me of a little dove. All my life i can wait, To have our first date. Chained to her love, What happend to my little dove? Every dream seems shattered, Every emotion battered. Nothing in my life what can i do? Come back my little dove, Come back because i need you. Everything is just, Shattered...... |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~This poem is a great first post...Brilliant job done here....keep it up..I cant wait to see more as i know what despair can do to someone...~ Blessed Be, Beth |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Kyle! You've captured many heartfelt emotions in this poem ... I hope things work out for you! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Welcome to Passions...arent you glad you are here? This is good... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Kyle, welcome to the family! Please check your email.  |
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