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louisianasweetie
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since 2000-07-16
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Metairie, Louisiana, USA

0 posted 2000-07-16 07:32 AM


I sit here loving him
Wondering if he feels the same
I wonder, then I start to think
Why do I feel this way
I ask myself that question everday
Hoping he feels the same way

Loving him is hard to do
When I don't know if he's true
If he is there's no need to ask

All I've got to say is
"He's the only one I think about day in and day out"
I can't stop thinking about him
And all I can do is pray
That someday in the end
I'll finally know how he feels

But fornow, I can't help but wonder if he's loving me right now.


© Copyright 2000 Sarah Hodges - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-07-16 07:57 AM


"Loving him is hard to do
if I don't know he's true."  
Precious sweet words...the same things I'm going thru right now with Lena...yes..someday I will finally know...James

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 2000-07-16 08:19 AM


Lovely first post, I really love how you related your feelings in this poem. Welcome to Passions, please check your mail for a message.
Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
3 posted 2000-07-16 08:39 AM


enjoyed your poem ... I like to hear about people in love ... helps to put a little faith back in human nature

welcome to Passions

louisianasweetie
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since 2000-07-16
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Metairie, Louisiana, USA
4 posted 2000-07-25 07:36 AM


Thanks to everybody that has read my poem.  I think this is the best one that I have ever written.  The weird thing is this is also the first poem that I wrote in my life.


Live life to it's fullest, because one day you will be gone and you might regret not having done the things you've wanted to.



Richard McDonald
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 29
Queensland, Australia
5 posted 2000-07-25 07:41 AM


I was in the same situation. Wondering if the love that I had and felt and was prepared to give was felt equally in return. If you love as much as you convey in your poetry then find the answers and have No Regrets. The answer given to me was no but I still have to regrets because it might have been yes and I would never have known. Looks as though you found and outlet for your feelings through poetry as I did. Well done!
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