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Michael G
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-16 05:08 AM


Fall, my love
To my breast,
My heart beats rythms for thee,
That once was lost upon me.
Hear my breath
My soul getting life
Awaken me so softly
I have not the will to fight.
Feel my body,
My heat that comes forth
This passion has turned
To comfort what we have learned.
Come kiss my lips,
This fire we create
Melt our bodies into one
Consume us for our sakes.
Fall my love,
Into my arms,
My strength has all our power
As we become comfort and love.

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-07-16 03:42 PM


Hear my breath
My soul getting life
Awaken me so softly
I have not the will to fight.
Feel my body,
My heat that comes forth
This passion has turned
To comfort what we have learned.
Come kiss my lips,
This fire we create
Melt our bodies into one
Consume us for our sakes.
Fall my love,
Into my arms,
My strength has all our power
As we become comfort and love.
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very well written poem here Michael
love the sensual burn of it...
very nice read..indeed
very romantic,perfect title
take care
jm

ps...saw your poem about sunday nite..
good luck at the poetry reading...
let me know how it was...


There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

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