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Fairy Tale, anyone?
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Fairy Tale, anyone? |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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(A fairy tale before bed....) < !signature-->"Will you ever love me?" he asked as they danced 'neath the light of the moon.. Her long dark hair hung thick in curls, From her lips came a mournful tune... But from those lips no answer came.. It was as if she could not hear.. And from her eye a single drop that he saw was a glistening tear... "I've waited for you so very long", he said as she danced 'round the bend.. "I'll wait for you through time and space, through Hell and back again..." His words became a silver mist suspended in the air.. They never reached the maiden's ears But vanished......who knows where! And all this time, the maiden danced and hummed her mournful song.. Not coming close within his reach yet taking him along... They reached a place where moonbeams opened up to morning's sky.. She turned to him, she blew a kiss, He knew it was goodbye... Then suddenly, upon her back.. He saw her fairy wings.. All shiny gold and silver lace made up of wondrous things... "You'll not remember me", said she, "As hard as you may try.. But there will be another new love, beneath the stardust sky." "I've granted you a wish this night, you'll get your heart's desire.. She'll dance with you throughout your life and never will she tire..." He reached his hand to touch her as she rose into the sky.. But mortal man he was that night and only fairies fly.......... ( I wish you sweet dreams) Your words become music to my soul...... [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 07-16-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Sunny what a story!!!!!!!!!! I love the dance and the wish....I just love the whole thing...WONDERFUL |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I had to come back and vote I was so thrilled with the story I forgot...HAHAHA |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula...... We must have like hearts!! I see you like fairy tales, too.......I've been hooked on 'em for years. Thank you for your kind words, and thank you also for the vote....... (Pleasant Dreams!!) Your words become music to my soul...... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Please, if you see her again- send her this way. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh..this was fun to read!!! A lovely fairy tale!  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh sunny just loved this fairy tale  wonderful piece. Gotta love those fairies...thanks for the dreams  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Simply Brilliant....I loved this fairytale...My dreams are going to be peaceful tonight...thanks for sharing this one...Absolutely loved it..~ Blessed Be, Beth |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~I forgot to vote for it....lol~ |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
I adore this sweet read!  MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
To Prometheus, Poet deVine, tracie66, Beth, and Magnolia Blue..... I'm glad you all enjoy fairytales as much as I do, and thank you all very much for your input!! It's so appreciated......... (wishing you all pleasant dreams every night) Live for today and enjoy the moment..... |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
This is one to read over and over again! I've always loved fairytales! You have my vote! Debbie |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Aah.....thank you, Debbie......... I always believed in 'Happily Ever After..' ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is magical and sweet, Sunny! I love it! Denise |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you, Denise........ I'm a great admirer of your work, and read everything of yours that I find!!! You've combined style with class and added emotion! I'll learn from you..... ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Excellent story with beautiful imagery sunny! I love fairy tales and yours is no exception. Nathan |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Nathan.... Thank you! I've always been a sucker for 'happily ever after'! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I loved reading this, sunny...very well done! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This flowed beautifully...what a wonderful tale~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Martie and Butterflies.... Thank you both.......... I love fairy tales...they sit gentle on the heart! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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UFgirl05 Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 10Winter Haven, FL, USA |
that was the perfect fairytale! [This message has been edited by UFgirl05 (edited 07-17-2000).] |
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UFgirl05 Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 10Winter Haven, FL, USA |
Wow that was really good I love fantasy things your poem flowed so nicely I love poems that are like that!! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
I just wrote a poem called "Fairy Tale" myself and posted it here.... must be something in the air.... Very mystical and romantic verse here. Thanks for the read. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh isn't this too cute? Now, on to the other tales... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Once upon a time, Sunny1 told a tale. . . And what a tale it was. . . just wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This was a beautiful fairy tale just as they all should be. I did cast my vote for this as well. My favorite part : "You'll not remember me", said she, "As hard as you may try.. But there will be another new love, beneath the stardust sky." "I've granted you a wish this night, you'll get your heart's desire.. She'll dance with you throughout your life and never will she tire..." He reached his hand to touch her as she rose into the sky.. But mortal man he was that night and only fairies fly.......... simply magical. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Just wanted to say a special thank you to you all for your wonderful input on this! It just proves what I always thought: we all like fairy tales, no matter what the age!!! (I wish you all sweet dreams) ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sunny, Oh how wonderful, I am so glad it is a book sub, this should be read by all who are needing of a little love in there lives, just perfect so very much enjoyed my friend. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you so, Cerenity....... Yes, I think every person needs a diversion to escape their reality. Fairy tales do that so well!! Hope this blesses you with peaceful dreams...... ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
I want to meet a fairy!!! This is fabulous...simply fantastic..loved it!!!! |
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